Error Identification

[Rosalisa]

Hi Teacher,

1.The water in Lake Superior is mostly totally pure, with only localized areas of pollution. ( I chose " with" and changed it to " in".)

2.Billy the kid, a famous outlaw [b]who[/b] was killed when shot by a sherrif, was named actually William H. Bonney.
( I chose " name actually" and changed it to 'named as'.

3.The doing of cheese begins with the coagulation of casein, the chief milk protein. ( I chose " doing" and changed it to 'making'.)

4.A epiphyte is a plant without any roots in the soil. ( I chose " in the soil" and changed it to " in soil".

Thanks in advance.[/u]
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[Mister Micawber]

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1-- wrong choice. Try again. There is a logical impossibility.

2-- Are you asked to change the errors as well as identify them? You found the error, but your correction is wrong. I suppose it should be 'actually named'.

3-- Good choice!

4-- No. Look to your articles.
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[Tom]

[Mister Micawber]

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look to
1 : to direct one's attention to <looking to the future>
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[Rosalisa]

Hi Mr. MM,

1. "mostly" totally pure...it should be erased...
4. "A epiphyte"....I didn't look at it carefully...It should be "an epiphyte...

Are these correct?

Thank you.
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[Yankee]

[Mister Micawber]

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[Rosalisa]

Thank you very much indeed, Mr. MM and Amy. I must be very careful later.
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