TOEFL® essay: Whether people pay income taxes is a question that interests...

[Nazeedzia]

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Thanks for responding my essay and also grateful to you, for helping me in correcting my mistakes.I appreciate that. I have one more problem about an essay. As i attempt it but not sure whether it covers the point of view according to the topic, been asked. Just help me for the concept and let me know if there need some amendments.

Whether people pay income taxes is a question that interests everyone who had ever worked. While some people believe that the payment of taxes should not be required, others argued that income tax is important revenue for the government. Which of these two positions do you agree with and why? Give reasons and specific details to support your answer.

I would like to support my point with the tax-paying category. There are lots of people who are worried of paying taxes because everyone want his account to be filled with money and never ever want to pay taxes but on the other hand they are also willing to avail all the services and facilities at any cost for free. This could never generate healthier and powerful needs for every person because of lower economical rates that government cannot pay. There must always be a need of public support to get economically strong country.

In this world there are many examples shown by different countries which are not paying taxes and their condition is so miserable that their government cannot help them in times of their needs.

I would prefer to pay taxes, that make a powerful society and the government take responsibility to overcome each problem created in that country. Considering its positive aspects, there is a free use of ambulances and free services are available in case of emergency just because of the tax we are paying while doing a job. You are not in hassle to get your own ride or search for help from outside, just dial 911, and help will be in your service.

While tax paying person, one gets advantage of insurance, of any kind. As the medical is so expensive in most of the countries, especially here in USA, the doctors charge too much so hat without insurance; one person only pays the fee and rests his life become miserable. So insurances saved one’s butt.

The major advantage of paying tax during the whole year help in reward at the end of the year. In other words, the money saved and received at the end for better use. There is a big hassle of applying for the tax as well and then wait for it. But the reward is uncountable.

At the end session of one’s life, this tax help that person without doing any job and pay all the expenses for required needs specially medical, food and transportation. The social securities are great reward at that time.
These taxes are also helpful for our institutional needs to improve technology and researches, which is a biggest consumer of money. As well as the doctoral studies also count free education whose expenses bears the university by the help of government.

The state issues, like if there is any damage, breakage or set a fire anywhere becomes governmental responsibility to overcome this problem instead of leaving it on the people of that area.

The expenses needs for the entertainment and recreational places are also a biggest responsibility of the government. These places are the important need for a person. Without their availability, proved to be a dead life.

The cleanliness of the area where a community, city, county, state and country comes this is also a very important issue, which could not be solved without help and support. And all needs financial help as first.

[Alan]

I would like to support my point with the tax-paying category. There are lots of people who are worried ABOUT paying taxes because everyone want his account to be filled with money and never ever wantS to pay taxes but on the other hand they are also willing to avail THEMSELVES OFall the services and facilities at any cost for free. This could never generate healthier and powerful needs for every person because of lower economic rates that government cannot pay. There must always be a need FOR public support to get AN economically strong country.

In this world there are many examples shown by different countries which are not paying taxes and their condition is so miserable that their government cannot help them in times of need.

I would prefer to pay taxes AS that makeS a powerful society and the government CAN take responsibility to overcome each problem created in that country. Considering its positive aspects, there is a free use of ambulances and free services are available in case of emergency just because of the tax we are paying while doing a job. You are not hassleD to get your own ride or search for help from outside, just dial 911, and help will be AT your service.

While A tax paying person, one gets THE advantage of insurance, of any kind. As medical CARE is so expensive in most countries, especially here in USA, the doctors charge too much so That without insurance; one only pays the fee and SPENDS THE REST OF his life becomING miserable. So insurances saved one’s butt.

The major advantage of paying tax during the whole year helpS in reward at the end of the year. In other words, the money saved and received at the end IS for better use. There is a big hassle TO apply for the tax as well and then wait for it. But the reward is uncountable.

At the end session of one’s life, this tax helpS that person without doing any job and payS all the expenses for required needs specially medical, food and transportation. The social securities are A great reward/BENEFIT at that time.
These taxes are also helpful for our institutional needs to improve technology and researches, which is THE biggest consumer of money. As well as A doctor'S studies also count free education whose expenses IS BORNE BY the university WITH the help of government.

The state issues, like if there is any damage, breakage or a fire anywhere becomes governmental responsibility to overcome this problem instead of leaving it TO the people of that area.

The expenses needED for the entertainment and recreational places are also a big responsibility FOR the government. These places are important needS for a person. Without their availability, IT COULD prove to be a BORING life.

The cleanliness of the area where a community, city, county, state and country comes this is also a very important issue, which could not be solved without help and support. And all THIS needs financial help IN THE first PLACE.

Alan
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[Nazeedzia]

Hi everbody,
i took my test on 9th of june, i did well and also hoping for best. Well lets see. I will thanks to all for help and specially Alan who helped me in correcting my mistakes. I still know that i m not so well in english till now but i will try my levels best to improve my english by using this forum. thanks to all once again.