TOEFL® essay: What is your approach to problem-solving, and how does it work...

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Question: What is your approach to problem-solving, and how does it work for you? Use specific details to support your response.

People face many obstacles in their both social and business lifes when they set long term goals for themselves and headed to the way to achieve their life-long campaigns. Having hills on the road that leads you to the great successes also brings you the ability to improve strategies in overcoming those obstacles and flying over those hills.

One of the srategies is the method of trial and error with which you first try many ways to solve the problem you faced and then choose the best one in which you spend minimum effort and time in removing the obstacle on your road to achievement. As Einstein said that “A stupid is that who makes same mistake as twice and expects for different outcomes”, the key for this strategy is that you must eleminate the ineffective ways which lead you to fail in solving the problem.

The second one is to experience the problem as many times as enough to seek and find the best solution. It is obvious that as people met problems much more, their understading of the causes of and approaches to problem improves and they refine themselves on solving those problems.

The last and the most important approach is that to think positively. It is a very efficient way to beat with problems through thinking that you have everything to struggle with and overcome the problem. It is also a good method in order to avoid stress and stimulate your self confidence on your road to achivement.

In conclusion, people should try to find solutions or methods in overcoming problems and obstacles they met throughout their life. Otherwise, they just become a prisoner of the world of their own fears and worries.