Use of Present Simple

[Taruna]

Hi.... I am not sure if it is correct section to posting. However I want to write something about me in Present Simple. I hope it will not bore you all.

Use of Present Simple

My name is Taruna Kagdiyal, I live in India. I work for BPO in Back end process. I enjoy my work more than anything. Sometimes I gets bore and annoy however my work is worship for me. My best friend name is Poonam Bagga. She also works in BPO. We both like to go for shopping and talking on the phone She is very nice and Intelligent person.

Regards,
Taruna

[Mister Micawber]

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Hi Taruna,

A few repairs:

My name is Taruna Kagdiyal, and I live in India. I work for BPO in Back-end Processing. I enjoy my work more than anything. Sometimes I gets bored and annoyed; however, my work is my life. My best friend's name is Poonam Bagga. She also works in BPO. We both like to go shopping and to talk on the phone. [Do not use emoticons in compositions!] She is very nice and an intelligent person.
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[Daemon99]

Hi MM,

[Mister Micawber]

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Both structures that I corrected were wrong.
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[Molly]

[Mister Micawber]

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Yep. Thanks, Molly-- I get.
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[Mister Micawber]

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And I do not advocate emoticons anywhere. You'll find that I never use them.
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[Molly]

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