TOEFL® essay: Why Do People Attend Universities?

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Attending a university is one of the most important things in our life. It is the door that leads to our future. There are many reasons to attend a university.

First and foremost, the most important reason is that people can get good jobs with a high salary if they have a diploma. However, if they do not attend university, their chance to get in university is lost and their salary will be not that much to spend on their family.

Las but not least, another important reason is that if people attend university, they will be experienced and much more educated than other people. And they will get to know others in university.

All people around the world want to attend university. The more people attend university, the more educated people will be. People who attend university are building their future.

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