 #2 (permalink) Sun Mar 12, 2006 11:25 am Letter |
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Hi Kelly,
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Re: Club organizer vacancy
Dear Sir/ Madam
I am writing in response to your advertisement in the local language magazine on (DATED) 11 March 2006. It appears (YOU SAY) that you are looking for a person to help organize a film club for English students. I am very interested in (SUCH A POST) it and would like to have an (THE) opportunity to (OF AN) interview.
As you will see from my enclosed CV, which shows that (LEAVE OUT WHICH SHOWS THAT) I have been learning Communication English for 5 years in an International Language School and also (I HAVE ALSO GOT) have got a certificate in Commercial English. With my easy-going, sociable and patient personalities (PERSONALITY SINGULAR) I am willing to participate in any discussion and ready to (BE) open to further opinions. So recently, I have been engaged a part time job (ON A PART-TIME BASIS) as an assistant consultant by the school owner. It means that I have had(ACQUIRED) a very good knowledge in (OF) English as well as the(NO ARTICLE) experience to (IN)leading a group of people.
Moreover, in order to effectively improve my listening skillS I would rather to (NO TO)spend my times (TIME) on (NO ON) watching American films and International News than the local (FILMS). So finally, thing (ONE FINAL POINT I SHOULD LIKE TO MENTION IS THAT) (I would like to cover is that) I am very interested in working as a film organizer and also (CONSEQUENTLY) I believe that I would be suitable for the post mentioned.
I am looking forward (I LOOK FORWARD TO) to hearning (HEARING) from you soon,
Yours faithfully, |
Alan
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Alan
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